Thursday, March 15, 2012

"By the Way" by Ali and Kasia


Authors Note: This poem is a parody of the poem This is Just to Say, and the narrator is Holly speaking to Lauren from the book Dark Secrets.This relates to when Holly killed Lauren's mother. The mood is happy. Well, in Holly's point of view it is. In Lauren's point of view, the mood is sad. The tone is murderous or maybe vicious.

I have killed
Your mother
When she was
By the lake

And while
You were probably
Sleeping
In bed

Hate me
I don’t care
For I did it
And I’m glad

1 comment:

  1. i really like this poem because the word choice is amazing and it sounds like a real poem writer wrote it.

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