I suddenly sat up, realizing there's no
use in trying to sleep anymore. I got up, my thin black hair sticking to the
back of my neck with sweat, and walked into Lauren's room. I asked her if she
knew where Bunny was, my stuffed animal. She told me that she was on the dock,
then offered to go get it, knowing I was terrified of the water. I told her no,
as I could go as far as the dock.
When I got down there, the dark uneven
planks of wood troubled me, but I went on anyways. Then, I looked up, and saw
Holly, my sister. She was running. I asked her where Bunny was, and she had
said he was further on the dock. I asked to grab it and she said no. She had
done something, and she had told me not to tell; it's a secret. I carefully
made my way across, and then saw Bunny. I went and grabbed her, then saw
splashing.
When I looked down into the water, I saw
Sondra, Lauren's mother, flailing and struggling to stay afloat. I looked on one of the pilings next to me and
saw blood. I suddenly realized; Holly had hit Sondra's head on it and pushed
her into the water. I just stood there, paralyzed, staring. I was so afraid,
and it didn't help that I was scared of the water. I looked down into the black
water swallowing Sondra. I've never been more terrified in my life. I wanted so
badly to help her, but instead, I did nothing but run to ring the Emergency
bell. Lauren and mother came running down. I went and sat next to Lauren,
shaking, worried, waiting. I saw mom with the body, but it was too late. Sondra
was dead.
Nice Descriptiveness! But, you need an authors note :)
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